Writing Tips: How To Use Commas
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Everyone has different strengths and weaknesses, and my weakness is mathematics. It's always been difficult for me to grasp, and it always seemed like math instructors were hardwired to teach it in the same way: Badly. If they had adapted their method of teaching to something I could follow I probably would have a much better understanding of it than I do now.
Often, learning English grammar is the same idea. We're taught to learn big words like adverb, clause, preposition, split infinitive, and so on--yet often the message of why and how to use grammar is completely lost. Many people, including myself, suffered through grammar class because of one reason and one reason only: It wasn't taught in a meaningful way! It wasn't interesting, it wasn't fun, and it certainly wasn't easy.
I'm here to shed some light on what grammar actually is: An indispensable tool that, when understood, will open new doorways for you as a writer. Let's learn about commas: They're used all the time and are one of the most important punctuation marks in writing. There may be a lot to learn, but each small lesson is pretty easy. Let's go!
Lists ("Serials")
One of the most common uses for commas is to separate words in a list. The basic rule is if you're listing something, put a comma after it. If two things go together (like "oats and honey"), put a comma after the pair. Make sure that what you're trying to say is clear to the reader!
- Oats and honey, coffee, cream
- Split infinitives, gerunds, insanity
- Blah, blah, blah
The Oxford Comma
The Oxford comma belongs in the list category but is so controversial I've put it in its own section. For some reason there is a group of people who vehemently condemn its use, but I've never understood why. The only reason I can think of is that opponents view it as persnickety, unneeded, and snobbish. As we'll see, though, that's far from the case!
I'm a huge supporter of the Oxford comma. It erases all possibility of ambiguity (confusion.) It's standard use in the US, but in Britain has fallen out of favor. The Oxford comma is placed before the words and, or, nor in a list.
Without (ambiguous):
- To my parents, Donny and God.
- The meal was soup, salad and macaroni and cheese.
- I don't like commas, apostrophes or grammar.
With (unambiguous):
- To my parents, Donny, and God.
- The meal was soup, salad, and macaroni and cheese.
- I don't like commas, apostrophes, or grammar.
A popular band, Vampire Weekend, has written a song half-condemning the Oxford comma. However, they're such a good band, it doesn't bother me much. I'd hate to read their autobiographies, however.
Breaks In Sentences ("Appositives")
A break in a sentence that adds more information is sandwiched between two commas. If you take the commas and additional information out of the sentence, it's still a coherent sentence.
Examples:
- Orson Scott Card, an author, writes good books.
- Learning grammar, in my opinion, is very useful!
Between Adjectives
Commas are used to separate strings of adjectives (descriptive words.) However, the last adjective in a sentence does not need a comma after it.
Examples:
- The powerful, energetic man was an excellent athlete.
- The smart, exceptional author learned to use commas correctly.
Between A City/State, City/Province, City/Country, State/Country
A comma goes between the city and its state/province/country. When using the name of a place at the beginning or in the middle of a sentence, a comma separates the state/province from the rest of the sentence.
Examples:
- I'm originally from Boulder, CO.
- A few years ago I visited Saskatoon, SK.
- Ann Arbor, Michigan, is a unique university town.
- I visited San Francisco, California, USA, when I was a kid.
- I'd just arrived in Chennai, India, and was already hooked.
After Introductory Phrases
Commas separate the beginning phrase of a sentence. It's a brief introduction but isn't part of the subject or verb. To illustrate this, we separate it from the sentence using a comma.
Example:
- In the beginning, there was light.
- At the end of the day, commas are pretty useful!
Between Two Sentences ("Independent Clauses")
Sometimes two complete sentences are tied together with a comma. They're stand-alone sentences united for convenience.
Examples:
- You might feel overwhelmed right now, but you'll get the hang of this.
- Grammar takes lots of practice, but it's definitely worth learning!
Direct Address
When talking to someone, we place a comma after their name to note a brief pause before continuing the sentence.
Examples:
- Heather, you've got to stop reading so much about grammar.
- But Mom, everyone's learning how to use commas but me!
Before Direct Quotations
When a quotation is being introduced, we put a comma after the introduction and before the quote. No commas are needed when using a partial quote.
Examples:
- Before leaving, John asked, "Did you know I learned about commas today?"
- When reading his paper, Martha said, "My God, what impeccable grammar!"
No comma needed:
- According to her friends, the author of this hub is "a Grammar Nazi."
- Debby asked me if I was always this fussy about grammar.
Wheww!
I realize commas are used for just about everything, and it's going to take a while for you to remember all of this. Please use this hub as a reference when you need help! To be honest, commas give me a hard time. Every time I edit a paper or hub I delete about 20% of my commas.
Through practice we can all improve our understanding of commas and grammar. Don't worry; it takes time, patience, and perseverance, but in the end it all pays off. Practice makes perfect! Don't worry if you don't remember everything right away. I still can't remember some things about commas and I'm a Grammar Nazi! :)
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Useful, interesting, awesome, UP and thank you for a great hub! :))
Your opening paragraph had me feeling a bit blue, Faceless39. I honestly believe that, as a mathematics teacher, I would have been able to find a way to reach you. As a result, you would hopefully feel better about the subject today.
Anyway, your hub on the use of the comma is a good one. I have always felt that a good rule of thumb would be "when in doubt, use one." There is nothing worse than trying to read someone's writing when commas are omitted. Your examples and explanations are clear, concise, and effective.
Voted up, useful, and interesting.
P.S. Do you agree with my usage of the 10 commas in this comment?
Great Hub. I totally and emphatically agree with you about the Oxford comma. It makes so many fuzzy and confusing sentences perfectly clear. I use it all the time and am irritated almost beyond belief when some of the English faculty where I teach omit the comma before the conjunction. They are English teachers for heaven's sake!! Thanks.
This is some great useful info Faceless. Pretty cool quiz as well. That last one is really a stumper. I got a 50%, 100% the second time though:) Great article that really comes in handy when writing. Bookmarked. Voted up and useful.
Nice hub. As a local newspaper writer, I am asked to speak to language arts students. I tell them to use their commas! Better yet, ask yourself if a sentence would be more concise if it were broken up into two sentences. Some writers think the more complicated their sentence structure the more brilliant their writing. Not true.
Very good hub with useful information on the use of commas. In this age of poor education and texting language shortcuts becoming king, the importance of grammar is being lost on an entire generation of people.
I couldn't image, that one can write so much about simple comma...
Great hub!
This is awesome! I LOVE your hubs! I will bookmark this one along with your other grammar hubs! (eat Grandpa - lol)
Voted up and awesome!
why am i not surprised with the quiz results?
"You're Well On Your Way To Comma Genius!" :(
But at least i can say i not only found the hub useful but interesting and funny. I never knew a "nazi" can be funny too.
Now let me scroll up to locate that green button
Faceless, thanks so much for this hub! I have problems all the time with commas, have read the rules and still don't get all of them. You've made this so simple and it's going to help me so much! Just what I needed!
Awesome hub! I'd like to buy the commas save lives poster.
UP...UP...UP.
I agree Grammar was such a boring subject and learning punctuation was not easy.
Loved this hub.
Hey there...I just wanted to let you know that I was editing content for a website I'm working on right now, and the content that the client gave me was full of grammatical errors. I recalled your hub and looked it up for a guide in correcting it!
The use of the comma can be quite confusing. However, this hub is going to help me.
Bookmarked and voted up.
Thank you!:)
I will be using your hubpages often. Great information. I really needed a refresher course on commas. I scored 100% on the quiz!
This is very helpful Hub for people like me who wants to improve my grammar. ;-)
faceless...
One of my writing resolutions for 2012 is to reduce my use of unneeded ellipses by 34%. I should think...knowing how to comma properly will help that goal.
I have bookmarked accordingly! I may use the Oxford comma as a character in a future story...I guess he wouldn't be dressed as fancy as his name implies. Perhaps, business casual?
Thanks!
Thomas
PS...shout out to missolive for the directions over hear!
The humor is great, and the quiz is great. Faceless39, I think I'm using the comma correctly!
Great points you have on "How to use commas"..Thanks faceless for the post
Thank you.
Faceless, i've been having some problems in punctuations, but now, i think am coping up.



























krosch Level 3 Commenter 6 months ago
Another excellent addition to what I assume will be a growing number of grammar articles. Keep up the good work and the more resources to help people who want to improve their grammar the better. Thanks for writing this.